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The Shire Creative Writing

Writer's picture: Jackson WilbrinkJackson Wilbrink

Updated: Nov 26, 2019



The Shire

Hi my name is Josh and this is my story. I woke up feeling refreshed and energized; I slept in and woke up around 8:00. I took a 12 hour sleep last night and I felt like going for a walk today. The sun was out, the birds were chirping, and the trees were glowing. I went downstairs dressed and ready I ate some cereal, and brushed my teeth, and went out for a walk. I took a pathway from the neighborhood park into the forest, I breathed in the nice fresh air and I started to take a walk. Once I went deeper into the forest something shiny and bright caught my eye, it was covered in some leaves and dirt. I walked over to this glowing object and I picked it up out of the leaves and dirt. When I brushed the dirt away I looked closely at it and it was a golden ring, not just any golden ring this ring had a silver chain on it and it had markings on it, a language that I could not read or understand. I took the chain off it and put it in my pocket and I placed the golden ring on my right ring finger. Right as the slightest bit of the ring fully went on my finger the markings on lit up! They started to glow a firey orange, the wind started to scream the trees shackled there branches, and the hole ground was shaking. The ground opened up into a deep dark hole I fell through into nothing but darkness. Right as I started falling a bright light shined like another opening once I fell through this opening I landed into this green feild surprised how I wasn't hurt or scratched, or didn't feel any pain from the fall I looked around. I seemed to landed into a little field with crops, hills with houses built into them, and there were barriers, fences and gates. I walked over to the little hills and this sign catches my eye. The sign spells Hobbiton. I walking into the distance and trying to get a good glance of where I am. Then I see this little town with these odd looking dwarfs. I walked over to one of them in confusion of where I am…

“ Excuse me. Ya you where the hell am I?

“Who in the bloody hell are you and why are you so tall” “why are you so short” said Josh “well good sir Im a Hobbit

And this little town is Hobbiton and we live in the Shire”

who are you said Josh “my name is Bilbo, wanna come into my house for a cup of tea?” sure “said Josh”. once he got into the house he had his cup of tea and left once he went out side of Bag End Josh was confronted by an old hobbit who was a old short lady, she grabbed Joshes, arm and said “that ring you are wearing s pure evil get rid off it now” why said Josh “because it will bring upon great evil amongst the Shire and kill off all of Hobbiton and Middle Earth and what ever you do don’t give it to Gollum” Josh was so confused he just ran off into the forest into this dark cave. Out of no were this creature lurking in the dark jumps out at Josh. It was the one they called Gollum, “Give my precious back now”.





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